Tuesday, August 23, 2005

Haiku (almost)

Tonight, an orange moon

glows.

"Come here. Look." He would say.

9 comments:

Eunice said...

oh dear sweet haiku.

*snaps*

mmmm...that's delicious said...

CLB,

it's a blessing and a curse. i'm not sure what "kraft" means, please enlighten.

thanks for not hawking any prescription drugs here, either. :)

mmmm...that's delicious said...

R & E,

Are you two making fun of me? :o

I didn't do the haiku thing on purpose, it just came out...i think it's nice you two stinkies!! :)

mmmm...that's delicious said...

"stinkies" don't ask me where i got that...

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loper said...

nice blog :)

Eunice said...

what the hell is a "corking blog?"

anyway, on to my comment. since it's all about me, you know. I wasn't jacking w/ ya. I was actually doing the haiku thing the other day, so I read up on it. I am no expert, but am now well versed (pun intended).

technically, this isn't one, since it doesn't follow 5/7/5, but who cares? I like it. :)

mmmm...that's delicious said...

yes, eunice, i was baffled myself.

anyway, i don't the rules for haiku bend a little when it is written in a language other than japanese? i know the 575 rule is important, but stricter i though in japanese...who knows...i think you may be right, though...i want to read yours now, we should have haiku week!!

Eunice said...

You're right, and since I don't speak japanese...

Seriously, my haiku was lame. I was at work, and I was bored, so I wrote one about plastic bags. I am a big dork.